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suleem
Suzanne Montpetit
Canada, British Columbia, Nanaimo

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Wings

I shared time with the universe
walked with the stars standing brightly at my side.
held hands with a rainbow colored for my enjoyment.

Impressed upon my shoulder lay a hand
the hand of my conscious.
guiding me gently through unchartered territory.
Inventing ways to avoid danger.

Hapless I have lost my wings
the only gift I had given myself.
Rest assured, I did not faulture in losing them,
I gave them to the homeless, the unfortunate, the lonely.
I gifted them to the child abused,
the elderly with nothing.

I left no one without only me,
yet my wings will fly
my guilded feathers will show them the way,
joy will reach them for eternity.

But what of I
what of the holes I have left in my blades,
can I fill them in?
can I reshape the one feather left
into a force of Godliness.

I know my way home,
I know where to lay my head,
I know where my heart is each and every beating second.

I am not undone
I am here, in this moment
sharing this message with you.
I am nothing and everything in return.

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Min Comment by: Min - 2007-07-25 10:10
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Have you run out of energy? Have you decided to stay in the same place? Do you no longer need wings? This poem threw up more questions than answers. It made me think.
faulture?
dreamer Comment by: dreamer - 2007-07-25 01:21
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This is apowerful poem, with strong moving imagery. I think your first paragraph takes away from the power. It's a bit too shiny with the universe, stars and rainbow bit, whereas the rest has a great combo of pain and joy. JMO, do as the voice in your head tells you to.
Nightingale Comment by: Nightingale - 2007-07-24 23:52
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I'm moved,really.You wrote a very lovely poem,a gently touch of eternity,the caress of a lost angel.Very good.
fiddled Comment by: fiddled - 2007-07-24 20:51
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Very inspirational, and written with feeling in the words. Bravo. =)
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