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| nice one... "desire and stupidity"-clever |
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| Delightful imagery. Strong language. Frustration or accusation? Interesting song. Hard. |
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| I sense a little frustration with a particular piece of work perhaps? lol. I liked this. Don't we all become a little obsessive with perfection in our writing sometimes? Very nice. |
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Comment by: ymh99 - 2007-07-28 12:04
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Caryn, I also liked this.
Small edit in (An art made from) should that be "And?"
This read really well for me, good rhythm. |
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I'm not much of a critic. But, I like Swoon.
Could (and I emphasize could) this be called prose? |
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