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| Hey, is this about the dangers of sun tanning? :) I like the imagery though. |
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| It's great how a short poem,with words that flow together so nicely can say so much....I loved it,and I LOVE the beach(especially the ocean). |
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I loved it. It didn't say any more and or any less than it needed to.
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Comment by: Teri - 2007-08-02 16:06
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Russet skin
Love that. Love the entire poem. Snappy and witty with a message. [And I'm a sun person, although I know I shouldn't.] Thanks for the read.
Teri |
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| nice expressions, the last night really kills the mood though. but you have painted a realistic painting. one can actually imagine it on a canvas |
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