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louisemarycoope
Louise Coope
United Kingdom, Wolverhampton

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Prolific (Ode to Sleeping Beauty) and Impaled (Ode to Sleeping Beauty (Part Two)

Prolific (Ode to Sleeping Beauty)
...........
Prolific poet,
pain princess,
love goddess,
climbs lonely spire.

Sleeping beauty
in her dreams
a long time
in her dreams
and not once
did she see
the prince.



Louise Mary Coope (2007)

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Impaled (Ode to Sleeping Beauty (Part Two)
...................................................................
In her dreams
In her medieval dreams
did she see the prince
impaled
after he impaled her
and then informed her
he wanted to concentrate on sweating over his kingdom?

I doubt it.


Louise Mary Coope (2007)

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Obsessedwriter Comment by: Obsessedwriter - 2007-08-02 09:24
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Short and effective. Good poem.
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