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shuchikalra
Shuchi Kalra
India

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aNGEL AND dEVIL

One day when God was in a creative mood
He took from the sun, its most brilliant ray
From the sea, it's most splendid pearl,
From the angels, their purest essence
From the flowers, their sweetest fragrance
He mixed them into a human body
And a soul so chaste
And what came out was a woman
A woman- powerful and weak
Sublime and abject
Kind and cruel
Passionate and fierce
Suffering and daring
At time s the best, at times the worst
Angel and devil'¦..

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blueangel Comment by: blueangel - 2007-08-04 02:09
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you've captured the real essence of a woman in this prose
jlshottie Comment by: jlshottie - 2007-08-02 21:21
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very powerful and it makes me happy and proud to be a woman!
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