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shuchikalra
Shuchi Kalra
India

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Heartache

Drops of water, they extinguish a fire
Loving care, it thaws a frozen heart
Mere words, bridge the farthest distances
An instant thought, transfers us to utopia
A dream, gives us a reason to live
Years tick by, and all wounds heal
People come and go, vanishing into thin air
We close our eyes to the world,
And then, we see 'Him'
But what does one do with heartache?

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Judy Comment by: Judy - 2008-02-07 21:39
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Very emotional and causes one to stop and think. I liked reading it a lot. Good Job!
BrindleyHD Comment by: BrindleyHD - 2007-09-07 14:49
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I like the structure of this piece; the way you balance to the two parts of the lines, until quite close to the end.
blueangel Comment by: blueangel - 2007-08-03 22:23
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Your last line made me pause and think...indeed what does one do with heartache, every thing has a reason, everything has a solution but for the life of me I don't know what to do with my heartaches
sushant Comment by: sushant - 2007-08-02 05:30
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I found your piece of prose really as some food for thought. You finely brought out the unseen dimension in those last 2 lines. Very nice.
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