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Blue
Blue is the color
That catches my eye
I walk the green earth
But look at the sky...
And see my favorite color but still wonder why....
I always look to a color
That is the tear in your eye
But no not to me
When i see blue, I see new life
I see bravery
The kind it took
To cross foreign seas
The power of each wave that crashes into me
When I see blue
I see serenity
And all that makes me happy.
From the wide open sky
Where I can spread my wings
To the deep blue sea,
Filled to the brim with exploration
Blue, The color that brings out
The good, and washes out the bad
Cleanses my mind from all the troubles I've had
Blue like the rain
That tames the brain
But with all my power
I can't explain
The way blue can drain
All the sorrow
All the solemn thoughts
When all alone, I can not
Blue, is the color for me
And forever will I see
A world colored blue
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Comment by: Swimmy - 2008-09-14 10:57
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| I love how it flows in a sort of breezy way, how it reminds me of the ocean when the sky is full of puffy clouds, and the mental imagery that you convey is so peaceful. |
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Comment by: adsaige - 2008-07-24 09:52
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A very easy, swaying write. I enjoyed
this piece immensely, and the rhyming
was good, not over stressed, or under
written. Overall, you made it work very
well for you.
My only suggestion, is perhaps a space
between each stanza. It would offer
more organization, and flattery to
the reader's eyes. Perhaps
form poetry would also add to it,
visual for that wavy effect.
Continued writing and success. |
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| Lovely, you know i'm very intruiged with the color blue too, but also yellow-green, those are ironcally the color of my eyes but truly, I see them in allmost everything-atleast a tint of yellow and green is allmost all around-atleast in what we haven't made up ourselves. You've captured imagination and truth in what the color that expresses well, Youth-it is cleansing, it's helpfull, it's bold, and is truly the money-the economy of nature-it helps everything stay alive-no matter what we continue to find in it that made some parts feel sorrow-we've done it to ourselves, we could've prevented it but many of us hold on to our wealth and so with wealth comes disequality and dissapointment from the true wealth/health of our souls - that is pure blue. Thanks for the read, flowed dramatically. |
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| I love this,but uh...you left out an e in deep.I`m sorry,I just thought you might like to know |
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Comment by: jauhar - 2007-08-02 14:17
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| Iwas greatly impressed but the realistic construction. Ans must say I do feel blue |
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