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suleem
Suzanne Montpetit
Canada, British Columbia, Nanaimo

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An Addiction

Elecric
An addiction without compromise.
A narritive without words
your mouth, my lips.

Breath enters through the tongue
salavating our love, swallowing emotions.
Tearless droplets of eye liquid
rise to meet your cheeks
tender and sweet.

Your body holds no boundries
no ropes to tie your heart.
etched on skin
lines are drawn.
I honor you, your demure
your secrets safe with me.

One red rose
a crystal vase
candles flicker, in the distance
as the wind blows softly inbetween our bodies.
Hopeless and unleashed
I am fully present gifted in a prism of color.

Emerging from the darkness
a calm certainty this will end.
The window will shut out time
as we merge as one.

An essense of grace
Acceptance
Desire

An eloquence
chemistry,
Yet we are fire and water
My desire puts out your flame.

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heidrunknikander Comment by: heidrunknikander - 2007-08-14 03:51
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Great poem, I like it very much, just the last line desturbes me.
jlshottie Comment by: jlshottie - 2007-08-02 21:37
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wow! This poem was very breezy, it flowed together so seemlessly. I liked it very much.
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