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janedevine
jane devine
United Kingdom, Leeds

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City Smells

Urban life
A world within itself,
Peppered with trips to the 'town',

Where senses are intrigued
Hyper stimulated,
With sticky sweet
Sight and sound,

Breezing by, a waft comes near,
Of posh ladies perfume
And burgers,

Burger eating ladies
Surely not,
But that is the image
I have got.

Earlier I could swear
There was a bus
And its exhaust was singing a waltz

As I danced along the pavement
Dodging salad,
Pigeons, cardboard,
And blood clots,

From the window with the chocolates
Of Madame de Barded,
To the doorway wafting hot air
And the smell of freshly baked bread,

It's a habit of sorts
These excursions,
Among hurried people
Harassed and hot,

It's not novel you see
I can get this,
At any busy spot

The shops spill out their tricks,
From a bottle they evaporate
Into the air,
Chosen that very same day,
By Dave from sales

And the Items that you can get
Are much cheaper on the net,
But it's not the same
Without the name
Of city

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ramonesgirlxoxo Comment by: ramonesgirlxoxo - 2007-12-28 06:18
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"Burger eating ladies
Surely not,
But that is the image
I have got"

Made me smile. :) haha. Reminds me of Chicago. I love it!
tedspeed Comment by: tedspeed - 2007-11-13 19:14
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Nice sense of whimsy -

Breezing by, a waft comes near,
Of posh ladies perfume
And burgers,

Burger eating ladies
Surely not,
But that is the image
I have got.

Made me giggle. Who says serious poetry has to be "serious'?
Reminds me of shel silverstein strolling downtown.
janedevine Comment by: janedevine - 2007-11-13 02:55
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I hate shopping really but I like the odd trip to the city even if it's just a bus ride through. It reminds me of the variety of life and the different people you see are very inspiring.
Ginja75 Comment by: Ginja75 - 2007-11-13 02:42
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Really enjoyed reading this, very witty and at the same time cynical. It looks like you had fun writing it.
Comment by: - 2007-08-11 08:40
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very good reading and certainly true.....well expressed
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