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anastazija
anastazija dimitrievska
Yugoslavia, Macedonia, Kumanovo

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Empty

Souless I wander this ocean of sorrow,
seeking for a simple salvation,
love given, nothing in return.

Brainless I walk those streets of confusion,
looking for a single reason,
love given, nothing in return.

Heartless I run in this labyrinth of fear,
reaching for the solution,
love given, nothing in return.

And what is left in me?
Love is already given, I got nothing in return.
Hollowness, emptyness, shallowness...

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anastazija Comment by: anastazija - 2007-08-07 19:11
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:))))) Thanks...
charlottescadeng Comment by: charlottescadeng - 2007-08-07 05:40
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Excellent. I particularly like the line "heartless I run in this labyrinth of fear".
anastazija Comment by: anastazija - 2007-08-05 07:05
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Thanks, I love it too. :)
snow786 Comment by: snow786 - 2007-08-05 04:28
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i must say its really a very very beautiful and lovely poem i've read.
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