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Walker Singleton
United States, Tx, Lubbock

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June-bug

June-bug -
buzzing vehemently 'gainst my window's pain -
How many friends hast thou brought?
Flapping wings -
Lost souls of the tragic twilight -
Misconstrued in your rapturous love
for my halogen bulb -
Sad misguided June-bug -
thoust will not touch the flame within
Begone!
Buzz away,
far into the celestial glow thereafter -
Beseech exoneration
from lonely old man moon -

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skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-26 09:25
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It’s very entertaining in your choice of language. I like the old and new usage of words in this. A couple of typos: (Miconstrued) Misconstrued and (exhoneration) exoneration. ~T
briana Comment by: briana - 2007-11-15 23:45
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Miconstrued in your rapturous love
for my halogen bulb"

my favorite part.
popeye Comment by: popeye - 2007-08-21 14:38
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beautiful - simply beautiful........i could see the events play out in my mind. inspiring poetry, keep writing............
fredav Comment by: fredav - 2007-08-14 05:39
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this made me sad. sigh. it's nice to see something new from you.
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