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dylan32
Dylan Clements
United Kingdom, London

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The Stars To Pity

When I die, I hope to go unmissed,
For it to be said, indeed,
'Well, he was always pissed,
Which might explain his need
To dance with the bears.
It is, however, unfortunate,
That their only cares
Were not to dance, and so him ate.'

May 2004

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GraceyLou Comment by: GraceyLou - 2008-03-25 22:29
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hmmmm...that was very interesting. but i did like it.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-06-03 20:32
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haha! like so many before me, i really enjoyed that. thanks
raynefyre Comment by: raynefyre - 2006-12-04 08:26
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short to the point, well written. I like :)
tatuwalker1 Comment by: tatuwalker1 - 2006-06-29 10:28
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lol cute
Comment by: - 2006-05-25 15:26
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Funny and very funny-you just made a depressed guy laugh. Great!
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