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darkbluegirl
cristina lupsa
Romania

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Stupidity

On the winding roads
Of life,
I find creatures
Bizarre
That are shuffling
Randomly,
Without a destination
Clearly defined,
With their heads more blurred
Than London.
Their weak voices sound like
Idiotic songs,
Their bulging eyes are annoyingly
Blank.
Words are an enigma and like
Idiots,
They fail to solve the puzzle of
Sentences.
It's all mingling in their heads
A concoction
Blocks their wrecked brains and
Connection lost.

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GSHOUGHTON Comment by: GSHOUGHTON - 2007-08-13 20:39
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A great sadness (isn't it?) that this is the world in which we live...insert any city's name...
MsBanks Comment by: MsBanks - 2007-08-09 21:25
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I like it
Comment by: - 2007-08-08 05:00
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I got the feeling of insects here... a colony of ants... busy going about there daily, mundane routine and how they reflect human society... I also see frustration in misunderstandings of one's intentions...
That may sound a little stupidâ?¦lol

thanks for sharing â?¦ :)
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