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flack47
Mitchell Hargrave
United States, KS, Hutchinson

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The Oldest Trick

Larry had long coveted Wally's newest game console. He spent many hours scheming ways to sneak into Wally's house and take it. Just when it seemed no plot, no matter how diabolical, would work, Larry had an epiphany.

'I'm coming!' Wally threw the door open. He snorted. 'Oh look ' a giant wooden horse.' The door slammed shut.

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standingstrong87 Comment by: standingstrong87 - 2007-12-19 19:00
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Can't lie that is makes me smirk. short and sweet.
winklett Comment by: winklett - 2007-09-11 14:18
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That IS funny. And it may well be the oldest trick! The ol' Trojan horse routine. I love being suprememly entertained in just 60 words! Thank you.
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2007-09-06 19:20
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I really did LOL at this ...

you are sooo not right
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2007-08-17 15:10
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Foul play fouled up! Cute idea.
icy Comment by: icy - 2007-08-17 05:01
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Hehe, fantastic! It's amazing how much you've packed into so few words. Awesome!
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