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Rosie Sandler
Rosie Sandler
United Kingdom, Essex

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The Oldest Trick - Karjon's Challenge

He'd just cut his beautiful assistant Glenda in half when his wife walked in.

'What are you up to now, Harold?'

'Just practising my art.'

She sighed and fetched a broom. 'I wish you'd find a new hobby, Harold. That's another corpse I'll have to take to the tip. And just look at the mess all over the new carpet.'

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marlinmark Comment by: marlinmark - 2007-12-21 12:20
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Wonderful, this is a very poor magician!
Rachel Escott Comment by: Rachel Escott - 2007-11-27 04:09
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A great down-to-earth vocab and tone that off-sets the gore nicely. It seems effortless!
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-08-14 12:58
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Cutting edge stuff, gory and messy, but beievable in a sadly morose sort of way - Grae.
VaughnShepherd Comment by: VaughnShepherd - 2007-08-13 14:23
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Haha! I love morbid humor! And a great sort of 'twist', even in a story this short! Well done!
Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski - 2007-08-13 11:28
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This is a lovely bit of sick humor. Funny stuff.

Bill
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