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Chesterjeeb
Barry Capp
United Kingdom, Kent, Rochester

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Dragon Teeth - Karen's challenge

'Get ya dragons teef 'ere! Two for a Groat!'

'Peddler, are these bona fide teeth?'

'No Milord! I don't sell bone, jus teef.'

'You misunderstand me. Are these dragon fangs authentic?'

'Authentic? I'll have you know these teef were plucked from the fiery maw of a Malastarian Cloud-Hugger!'

'Really? Why is 'ETCHED IN CHINAR' stamped on the side?'

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Chinaren Comment by: Chinaren - 2008-04-01 23:38
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heh! Nice one! Short but very enjoyable. Liked the use of accents!
nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee Online- 2007-08-12 21:23
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Very cute, with a nice use of dialect. Good thing it's this short, though, or I think I'd go crazy with its thickness! The "Chinar" thing was hilarious, of course.
gmarco Comment by: gmarco - 2007-08-11 01:20
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Pretty slick. I chuckled at the 'bona fide' joke more than I think I should have...

-Garrett
RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-08-09 20:05
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Hahahaha well done. I loved it!
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2007-08-09 09:15
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hahaha Love the 'Chinar'. Goes great with the dialect. As always, enjoyable and wonderful. Thanks, Barry, for the read.

Teri xo
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