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LWhelan
Laurie Whelan
United States, Florida, Homosassa

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Antique Clock

The sound entered my ear from my right; it bounced off the other side of my skull and rattled around until it landed on the soft tissue of my brain. I turned my head to the left and covered my head with the pillow; there would be more, eleven according to the small neon light which turned from eleven fifty nine to twelve. I covered my head with the ivory damask covered pillow and pushed as much of the fabric down as a possible, bracing myself for the next barrage of pain thinking whiskey doesn't mask the sounds of home.

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dlynn Comment by: dlynn - 2007-09-15 11:23
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Quite the picture you paint.
I like your work Laurie.
jewtich Comment by: jewtich - 2007-08-10 14:47
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I liked this very much
LadyMoon Comment by: LadyMoon Online- 2007-08-10 05:55
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Hello :)

This took me a while to get into, but I enjoyed it all the same.

Thanks for sharing.
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