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TequilaTwilight
Mercedes Dawson
United Kingdom, Manchester

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1 in 3, The Maiden The Mother and The Crone

Fate made me a question created at birth
but only raised when death made me age,
the true meaning of a family tree rooted
and written out in clear DNA, in paths
crossed over and over, of scans, biopsies
and chemical death so slow it sleeps us dead.
I am my mother's daughter and she her own,
all matriarchs of a line doomed to abdicate
the thrown, to hand over the crown too early,
responsibility taken out of clasped hands
to be thrown into those not even lined yet.

And so I too ask ' when will I pay my pound of flesh?

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faine Comment by: faine - 2007-08-15 07:28
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The theme for me in this is universal: When will I cease to be a child and have to become my mother (or is a boy's case, his father), who was once a child too? It is about a loss of innocence thrust upon us by adulthood. Aptly and elequently done. Only suggestion: Fourth line from the bottom: I think you meant "throne" not "thrown". Great piece, otherwise.
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