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darkbluegirl
acid chick
Romania

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Pleasure of disaster

People screaming,
Moaning, begging,
Blue sky darkening,
Casting lava,
Stones cracking,
Falling,destroying,
Earth splitting,
Unfettering the deads.

The frenzy seizes me:
I am laughing, jumping,
Running, crawling.
The delirium touches the zenith,
I am clapping my hands amazed
By the splendor of the outrages
Reminding me of chain reactions.

A question is springing,
Sketching a grin on my face:
Am I a sadist?
No.
I am honest.
Let's all unleash the beast
Lurking within us
And enjoy together
The show of our destruction.
Listen'¦
Smell'¦
Watch'¦
The sound of despair,
The burnt flesh,
The Apocalypse coming.

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Promking007 Comment by: Promking007 - 2007-08-12 17:35
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'Nother good one. You've captured the rapture!
Comment by: - 2007-08-12 01:44
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By the splendor of the outragesâ?¦

Iâ??d consider â??outrageousâ??

I really like the apocalyptic feel of this poem.
The end of the world is always nighâ?¦

nice work ;)
MissEroticWriter Comment by: MissEroticWriter - 2007-08-11 20:19
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"Letâ??s all unleash the beast
Lurking within us"

How wonderfully perfect...

I like the taste you left in my mouth...
sassinmarie Comment by: sassinmarie - 2007-08-11 10:58
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I think we all have a darkside, and those who don't are lying!I liked it, the message you are conveying is straight forward.
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