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Saira
Sarah Quinn
United Kingdom, Hampshire

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Barry

I am calmer now,
It's been a while,
I put that down to you,

I've more respect,
For life and death,
For that I blame you too,

I've one more child than I had before,
And that's because of you

I found true love in my darkest place,
Again I find it's you,

You are my light,
You show the way,
And bring my dreams to view,

I am happy now,
It's been a while,
And all because of you.

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Phillozofee Comment by: Phillozofee - 2008-07-02 04:01
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This free flowing dedicational homage, to a supportive partner, is convincingly and poignantly conveyed within the textual structure of your write. I would drop the commas after each line - they feel a bit distractive! Excellent composition.

Phill
vampirina Comment by: vampirina - 2007-11-07 10:38
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This has a good rhythm and the contrasting image of light/darkness works well. Good stuff.
Promking007 Comment by: Promking007 - 2007-08-15 13:03
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Life it's not for poofs. Nice verse.
artkincell Comment by: artkincell - 2007-08-12 13:38
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Very nice tribute... nicely paced too!
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