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Thunderpen
Parris ja Young
United States, Montana, Laughing Lady

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WHAT IS TIMELY

The arrival of the moon,
her slow dressing and undressing,
the silence of dawn before color,
the roar of the Sun that no one heeds,
these are timely.

What is timely
is the tick of mountains,
how they press forward beneath the silent sky,
how they grind their teeth in their sleep
until all are worn down.

Seasons.
The drone of the horsefly and mosquito,
the high purring of the Sandhill Cranes,
the song of frogs,
the decay of fallen leaves and the autumnal garden.

What is timely
fits like a familiar cotton T-shirt
made soft by long wearing.
What is timely
is the sudden intrusion of wit into discourse
the sudden intrusion of tears
as you spoke of your childhood
in the Bitterroot Valley.

Timely.
Death can come in a timely way,
speaks Her absolutely confounding Word
and the pine explodes one last time
in a florescent splendor;
or shades you or I with her black wings
and one must lie down.

What is not timely
is this Cancer,
that bursts into the room
arrogating all conversation unto itself,
who breaches your modesty
and pokes with doctor's fingers
into all your private places,
defiling the temple I was honored
to enter barefoot.

What is not timely
is this Cancer
uncovered/discovered lying
telling the womb, the cradle, the classroom
that it is a helpless embryo infant child
and needs, really needs, to be nurtured.

Cancer
takes a babe, children, or youth,
or those who might have had long years,
and leaves us bereaved, so pent up, sad, angry.

We have this in common, you and I:
survivorhood, bereavement,
the ache to help in the healing, and
the community we have thus inherited.

The work our Love requires of us;
This is timely.

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-01-09 05:06
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Your sense of wisdom seeps through your work. This is a very beautiful piece written with such grace. The scope of the poem is so broad yet so personal which is not an easy thing to write. Glad to have found your writing today.
nickvanick Comment by: nickvanick - 2007-12-05 17:56
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Your poetry is endowed with a sagacity only available to beirded men. Thank you for-if nothing else-bearing witness to the illumination that my pubescance has not yet bequeathed me. For what it's worth I also really do enjoy the poetry.
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2007-11-12 10:45
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I agree with everyone who has deemed this a powerful poem. The build up to the end was very affective. I wasn't quite sure where you were going with your train of thought, but when we got there it made total sense.

Thanks for posting this. I lost my grandmother to cancer this summer. Your words really touched me.
MarkAikins Comment by: MarkAikins - 2007-09-20 16:23
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Out of our worst suffering and pain so often comes our finest work, Parris. I will come back to this fine poem again and again.

and the pine explodes one last time
in a florescent splendor;
or shades you or I with her black wings
and one must lie down.

Thank you.

MarkA
knightdrk2 Comment by: knightdrk2 - 2007-09-04 11:33
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Wow, the images are so strong and your words ring with emotion, drawing the read in. I love your descriptions in the beginning of the moon and the mountains. Inspired by your setting, no doubt. I'm originally from Montana and there is nothing I miss more than the full moon lighting the mountains on a clear night. Your opening stanzas brought back those images for me.
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