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Fallacies
I had a grilled-cheese earlier,
not that it matters. That
was a non sequitur.
So who is this man-boy?
What's a non sequitur?
Latin for does not follow.
I.e. random.
He's a non sequitur.
He's following SOMETHING,
girl.
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| I like the voice and pacing - could be entirely an internal dialogue, or it could be internal dialogue spilling out into conversation. |
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Comment by: esknapp - 2007-08-22 12:52
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| I enjoy the sense of humour displayed here. You have good comic "timing". The smallest thing, I usually hear it refered to as grilled cheese. |
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| Same as first one - but in Latin, so I deleted it - Grae:) |
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Light and airy, but with a twist of misunderstanding. Almost a dialogue within a mind. What's a grill-cheese? What's a man-boy? I lost my garden pruners the other day - that's a non-secataur! Thanks for the read, I enjoyed it, especially incorporating Latin into things.
PS Rattus Rattus means black rat so rattus means black and 'rattus' means rat - excellent language Latin. Cheers, Leslie - Grae:) |
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