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beachtr
Deyanira Val Verde
United States, ca, marina del rey

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Running ahead

a rumor he heard
and became undone
creating
a mountain
made of sand
consuming
an imaginary
village
with a tornado
formed by a
gentle breeze
erecting a
monolith
out of sticks
broadcasting a
rumor,only rumor

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza Online- 2008-02-29 23:43
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This is so true.. well done an amazing piece of litereture...
dannykurl Comment by: dannykurl - 2007-12-25 02:47
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fear turning a harmless hovel into an edifice of evil

your verse rings so true........well done!
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-12-15 13:32
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Amazing how a rumor can ignite a whirl wind of unnecessary events...

Glen Yumang Manese
venturpreneur Comment by: venturpreneur - 2007-11-15 04:49
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Wow. Very good. Funny, sounds like a case for people I've known. Well written.
Chowrunnergo Comment by: Chowrunnergo - 2007-08-19 16:35
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I like how the images jump quickly from one to the next.
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