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sophen01
Sophie Heng
United States, PA, Philadelphia

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Echos

Echos of hollow screams
I cried
cries I swear
were once alive
now burden on dead ears

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kc0003 Comment by: kc0003 Online- 2008-09-03 22:42
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nice piece
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-12-15 16:17
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Keep your words flowing... I believe you wanted to use the plural here with "Echoes", sometimes the spell check will look over the "e" in the word, since you've uses the "s" in the word...


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WarlordsDaughter Comment by: WarlordsDaughter - 2007-11-01 23:42
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this is definitely my cup of tea Sophie. You've got "it"... whatever it makes us poets shine in our own right :) Keep up the good work love!
artkincell Comment by: artkincell - 2007-08-19 14:15
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God, good. I am a fan of anyone that can write anything under 20 words and dtill have meaning to the story.

Well done indeed!
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