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IIZZYY
Izzy .
United States, Ohio, toledo

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All Been Said?

Are we going in circles around circles of a large plot- Have all been said as a full body of people- Yet innovation is open to progressive building upon- Things yet to be discovered- Things yet to be invented as the minds needs pass it's limit- Will it happen without a plan, and have all been said- Have all of these words for creative manipulation been said with every combination- I think not- But are we saying the same thing over and over in our own ways as we discover life for ourselves over and over- Like a shock to your story of plans you had no idea it was in your book- But as you shop for a novel you find someone has the same book- Has it all been said- Has the leaves fallen down the same time of every new year as every new seed is grown from a seed that once was a long time ago- Breathe life into your soul and lungs- Exhale the answers to questions unanswered- Have it all been said- Peaking from civilization creators make way- This is a small world if you live in "it" ' Expand!

Peace, Izzy

10:45 PM
6/28/07
Copyright©2007

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IIZZYY Comment by: IIZZYY - 2007-08-22 12:14
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Thanks... Yes I noticed that. I do that often and have been working on it. Thanks for the comment. Much felt
JayBean Comment by: JayBean - 2007-08-21 16:58
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Heah very cool - a description of my own thought journey the past few weeks.

Each new generation steps forward with heady steps, thinking that they are more intelligent than the previous generations. Where they advance in some areas such as technology I think the thought processes and philosophies just go round in circles of re-creation.

After 10 years of floundering and thought expansion I had fallen into a deep dark hole of utter confusion. Scrambling to a small light found in my original journals I discovered a simplistic truth that I should never have forgotten - I had gone the full circle.

People of the past may not have had such advances in technology but they had simplicity of understanding that does continue through the generations. And it is as relevant today in this modernistic world as it was thousands of years ago. Sometimes we just need to stop, and listen.

Thanks for sharing Lizzy

Just double check your spelling as some words may have a different meaning if spelt incorrectly â?? i.e. (lounges â?? lungs)

Kia Kaha my friend,

J.B.
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