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Love
What is this love feeling thing- How do you get that feeling? How can you talk to a person and it just runs deep consuming you. Yet with another it dose nothing? How can you look at a photograph and feel a deep love? How can you look at another and feel nothing? How can memories haunt you and shatter reality? How does love start? How can you make feelings go away? Is it a pill to stop the heart burning that can be taken day by day? How do you take love away from hearing ones voice? How do you take love away from images, and seeing loves face? Can love be taken away? Should it even be? What is this love feeling thing? Do you really know? So many questions it must be few answers because this love things an industry of ups and downs, waves of the oceans currents motions. Asked the question'¦. How do you take love away?
Peace, Izzy
6/23/07
Copyright©2007
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Comment by: MsBanks - 2007-08-23 15:21
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| Very nice and when you find out what it is please let me know so that I can run far away from it lol. |
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| wonderfull stuff |
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| waves of the ocean~current motion.. that is what it is to me.. love brother~good stuff. peace. m |
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Tought provoking questions. I don't think there is an answer. I've asked myself the very same. You are young enough, you'll see. It doesn't get better with age.
You wrote [dose] did you mean to write does?
Good read,
RJ |
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You ask questions which probably everyone on this planet would like an answer to. But, you're correct when you say "This love thing's an industry of ups and downs".
I don't think love would even exist without the pain- just as all of LIFE wouldn't exist with the pain.
You can't force love away- when you're completely ready to move on to something/someone new, then it will leave on its own.
I suggest elaborating on this, and creating answers for some of these questions. They are good ones, but they are missing some philosophy and speculating on your part.
Keep writing! |
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