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Dead Deal
He was an old burro, so I couldn't blame him for keeling over. I just wish he'd waited until I'd left Ignacio's village.
'Sorry amigo,' I said, three hundred pesos in my pocket. 'Deal's a deal. I'll help bury him if you'd like.'
'Forget it. I can still make money.'
'From a dead mule? How?'
'A raffle.'
'Impossible.'
But Ignacio couldn't be dissuaded. Months passed before further business brought me back to that village.
'How'd your raffle go?'
'Great. I sold ninety tickets at ten pesos each.'
'Really? And nobody complained?'
'Just my winner. But I gave him a refund.'
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Comment by: karjon - 2007-08-24 17:33
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Aw, what a great con, Juan. Cracking wee story.
Thanks for the read.
Cheers
Karen |
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| Lovely! Brilliant! |
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| Lovely! Brilliant! |
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| Fun, clever story. Every line of dialogue is spot on, and the ending is perfect! Well done. |
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| Great dialogue, witty and light-hearted feel to this. Are the Mexicans similar to the Irish? They sound Mexican and also they sound like the Irish. Great scam - well done - Grae. |
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