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abnich
Andrew Nichols
United States, Georgia, Athens

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Lost July

A tribute to Lewis Caroll. In particular his last poem in "Through the looking glass". Also called "The Toast falls butterside down."

Tis said that man is born to dream,
Of sunshine and it's golden beams,
Of floating down an endless stream,
Beneath the summer stars that gleam.

Though the Hatter's dream may die,
The Red Queen give us such surprise,
With Alice drifting o'er the skies,
I'll dream of tea and mutton pies.

I have often wondered what may lie,
Between the wasteland and the sky,
And pondered that if I should try,
I'd find once more that lost July.

And the toast falls butter-side down.

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xxkrowxx Comment by: xxkrowxx - 2008-08-30 19:45
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i love this! cant wait to read more!
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2007-10-18 11:19
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i had seen few American writers who could juggle the rhyming and the meaning.
your quality seems consistent. your cadence is flawless. nadine
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-10-03 21:14
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very nice poem.
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-09-05 15:03
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very nice poem . in fact wonderful use of words.need to go and read more like what i have read so far . well done

Anne
lediarunnels Comment by: lediarunnels - 2007-08-25 20:56
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Very, very nice! Can't wait to read your other poems.
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