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charlottescadeng
charlotte scadeng
United Kingdom, My most common state is madness!, Oxford

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City Smells

Back to the street where I lived
In the city as a child
The estate filled with bashed in cars;
Dog shit on the grass.

Sun filled Saturdays playing BMX Bandits
'round blocks of flats.
Sunday roasts wafting from windows
As I sit on the dead lawn in summer.

Mum shouts out the window
And I run into the piss infested stairwell
Drunks on the steps, drooling, swearing
As I skip past, oblivious to adulthood.

The best days spent playing in the roads
Car fumes blocking my asthmatic lungs
Roller skate Sundays. Penny chews
Strawberry shortcakes mixed with smog.

Innocent imaginings, games and adventures
on garage roofs.
Rope swings, dens and muddy knees
Mixed with all my city smells.

Charlotte Scadeng © August 2007

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MysticSeamaiden Comment by: MysticSeamaiden - 2007-08-30 11:22
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I enjoyed you last verse, nice job
charlottescadeng Comment by: charlottescadeng - 2007-08-29 05:06
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Thank you for my comments. I'm quite pleased with it now too : )
matt1 Comment by: matt1 - 2007-08-23 18:35
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Love it. I particularly like verse 3. Nice contrast that balances the story in the poem. Really good!!
charlottescadeng Comment by: charlottescadeng - 2007-08-22 05:45
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Thanks for reading. I've edited it slightly now. I hope you like it!
matt1 Comment by: matt1 - 2007-08-21 20:21
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This is really good. I can both visualise and smell your past.
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