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charmedprincess
anne belmonte
United States

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Sister of the Moon

Do you know her name? Will you survive this deadly game?
Black widow's web illuminates, deceiving smile radiates.
By the light of the full moon, she seals your fate.

Intense silence falls, as she walks into the room.
Her deadly gaze now fixed upon you.
She is "Sister of the Moon."

Long dark hair, black velvet dress, green eyes captivate
you are helpless to resist.
She calls to you from within dark shadows.

Heart pounding with desire.
Damiana, Rose, and Jasmine ignite love's fire.


Unable to ignore you follow the erotic scent.
Mind full with illusion,
"she must be heaven sent."

She lures you into her deadly lair with promises of pleasure.
The seductive allure is almost unbearable.
The hypnotic trance slowly fades, skin now prickled with fear

She feeds upon your deepest desire taking what she can.
Then leaves you broken forever longing, to be with her once again.

Your futile search leaves you empty and cold
For the price of her touch was your soul.


You can't afford to be with her again,
for she is loves assassin and you are her victim.

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charmedprincess Comment by: charmedprincess - 2007-08-23 09:52
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Thank you Robert. I am still very new to this forum and am not sure exactly how to use it. I will definately come over to your profile and read some of your work. I am usually on writersdigest.com but was invited here. This is a very nice place with many talented writers. Now if I can just figure out how to travel here things will be great.
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2007-08-22 12:28
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Anne, this excellent. I especially liked "Black widow's web illuminates, deceiving smile radiates." --Robert Barlow
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