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| Ha Ha. Very ammusing piece. I think everyone can relate to this. Goes straight to the heart of the matter, much like a headache. |
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What an amazing poem! A short punch with great descriptives... I can feel your pain! :D
Jezz |
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| I never read a poem like this one that described such an annoying thing (a headache) so well. Great job on this one! |
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| Usually I really like details and extended analogies, but this poem really works with just getting to the point. |
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| One can feel the pain and yet I feel there is much more. Awesome |
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