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TendoQueen
Sara Chaer
United States, Virginia, Herndon

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Arrrgh.

<P>Remember that one piece I had up here? "Meeting Benson," I think it was called? Well, I reread it...wow, looking back on it, it was utter crap. The entire piece sounded forced, neither of the characters were developed enough to be even slightly convincing, I wrote it <EM>way</EM> too early on to know what I was doing, and...no, just no.</P>
<P>*ahem* So! I do believe I'll revise it. Revamp the paragraphs a bit, work on somma the sentence structure, completely overhaul Benson's character and dialogue...I'll have it back up-and-running in no time. I'm kinda excited about redoing it, actually...now that I know the characters (and what the heck I'm doing!) a bit better, it should turn out the way it's supposed to. Wish me luck...until then, though, see ya!</P>

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SunShinee7 Comment by: SunShinee7 - 2008-03-09 10:02
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Sound good! Can't wait to read it.
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