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SacredV
Jenni-Leigh O'Leary
United States, FL, Orlando

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Lustful Music

Fingers to strings, mouth to microphone
the sound of notes, the voice of vocals
Strumming my guitar,
I teased as I played


his reaction was clear,
with his lyrics he responded
as our music entwined,
the song began:


His words undressed me,
with a fiery touch
while my guitar sent vibes,
that probed his skin


The sexual tension,
had our rythum in toe
the potent seduction,
added flavor to tone

shaking I played,
slo-wly stroking
taunting the strings,
taun-ting his eyes


velvet lust,
inspired the music
the feeling, the vibe
a heat, you couldn't resist


together we played,
like we were one
an experience of desire,
a combination like no other


playing, fiercely
I would have him
singing, strongly
he would have me


together we created
this music of soul
an with the aching between our thighs
we played true Rock 'N Roll.


Written By: Jenni-Leigh O'Leary
Copyright 2006 Jenni-Leigh O'Leary

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon Online- 2008-11-06 19:01
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as a musician I can certainly appreciate your perspective..a very melodic and lyrical piece
Apollo Comment by: Apollo - 2008-04-02 20:45
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I couldn't help but think "strumming my pain with his finger..." I dunno it's probably just me... I did like this a lot, you're word choice is excellent. You definitely capture that sexual yearn for another.... Apollo gives it a 10! A Fuck'n 10! sorry I've had a bit to drink... but, honestly, I really liked it.
Aria Comment by: Aria - 2008-02-07 12:39
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taunting the strings,
taun-ting his eyes
I love this line very playful and well, taunting. And this next verse you finished the tone of the poem. I think, with a sense of comedy.

together we created
this music of soul
an with the aching between our thighs
we played true Rock 'N Roll.

How you culminated everything to 'rock and roll' is great. Good imagery and rythym.
SacredV Comment by: SacredV - 2007-08-24 16:11
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Thanks Guys For The Comments....And I Am Glad To Share The Lust hehehe.....I Mean The Music...haaaaa
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-08-24 05:15
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Music to f*ck to and music that makes you wanna f*ck...brilliant linkage there. Similarities are oh so true as well!
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