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MsBanks
Terry R Banks
United States, TX, Beaumont

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The Unspoken Word

the unspoken word is the word i often write

after it is written i seal it up and put it away
far from prying eyes disguised as friendly foes
i long to tell the world about my never ending woes
people look at me and no one ever seems to know
i'm so alone

the unspoken word is the word i sometimes speak

i tend to say it so low that no ear can hear it
and this way i don't seem weak
i long to be heard so that i can help change the world
you have a beautiful speaking voice
is what i was told as a little girl
so why does my lover rather i not speak
no one knows but i feel so alone

the word most unspoken is the word i hear everyday

it breaks me down so far that i can't even pray
can't even say that i believe in or hope for something better
i just write out my pain and seal it up
then i put it away as if it were some kind of secret love letter
because my words go unspoken more times than i care to remember
and often times i just about drown in my pain from january to december
people look at me and no one knows i feel so alone
they all just look at me and smile but no one can see that i feel so alone

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latiadjohnson Comment by: latiadjohnson - 2007-12-04 10:17
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"it breaks me down so far that i can't even pray
can't even say that i believe in or hope for something better
i just write out my pain and seal it up"

Wow! I feel like I walked to the depths of your soul and sat in the midst of this pain... you nailed this! sorry I was gone so long.
Keep writing sometimes beauty is born of pain...BEHOLD
MsBanks Comment by: MsBanks - 2007-08-30 20:34
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Thanks for all of your comments
RoyalT2U Comment by: RoyalT2U - 2007-08-30 08:21
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words that go unspoken, yet they yell out so clear you hear the breaths that you have taken...
I AM SO FEELING U - HERE!
BoyUninterrupted Comment by: BoyUninterrupted - 2007-08-24 03:42
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urg ... heartwrenching. i love how you've broken it into three sections with their own headings of sorts. there are billions of poems on the subject matter, yours is miles ahead.
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