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Informal Grae
Graeme Sandford
United Kingdom, HAMPSHIRE, Totton

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Last Resort - wee #9

"They're obviously using me as a last resort." thought Lemuel.

"But it's not fair. I don't know the ropes and now they're pinning me down on this matter. I just don't understand what they want from me. It's like they are speaking a different language.

They've really stuck it to me this time, verbal attacks are one thing, but when it gets physical...

Even so, they keep on feeding me the same stuff and I'm still hungry for more.

I'm not going to take this lying down. I need to make them understand me.

Now Mr. Hurgo wants to talk."


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Rosie Sandler Comment by: Rosie Sandler - 2007-08-26 16:19
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OK - is this a reference to something some people have read and I definitely haven't? Will scratch head alongside Costa.
costa Comment by: costa - 2007-08-25 06:03
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ok ok - now I feel like a doofus :)

One great big pun there, huh?

Nicely done, Grae - nicely done.

Cheers

Costa.
Evie Comment by: Evie - 2007-08-24 22:49
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*Insane giggling* That was a very Swift read.... :-D

Beautifully done. I sit here in abject envy.

"Mr." Hurgo.... *snicker*

*wanders off, still giggling*
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-08-24 13:53
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I think I got it - but don't want to say anything in case I'm wrong.

Anyway - enjoyed it even if I am away with the fairies.

Cheers

Karen
Comment by: - 2007-08-24 13:33
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I won't give it away, either, but when I saw the name "Lemuel," I thought that I haven't seen that being used in a LONG time.

VERY cool the way you employed the same environment and the challenge title.
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