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IIZZYY
Izzy .
United States, Ohio, toledo

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Get Your Family On-

Where are the families for real? You got fam but not the family for real

This is not a culture, this is a national break down- Unorganized organized Tragedy

Boy friend girl friend life what the heck ya say? It does not even start with the name men nor woman But boys and girls-

And what do you do when friendships break up fall apart grow apart never to make up- Never was even the proper make up to make up-

Not a family your investment is lost- Detached from a once union teaching the kids afar apart to be what?

What you are not apart- And it's not just for you- You have a duty to the village too-

They say only 35 percents of are families are together- I say at least 65 percent of the group of us less powerful week of focus true-

What is it that the individual seek- I know allot of people not even seeking for the commitments better- But striving for a made up right that's devouring away physical spiritual everything, everything-

I was family building to, and I lost not just you but two to three with we- And to what as I said the weakest desires it was not me'¦.!- This is pain you see on many different levels- I look across the board and see not many together- I know personally I will never see my parents in the same room never- Together- Maybe only at the death of one of us, and that's still maybe never

We got nothing without families so why not many families- I come back home to see families break up fucked up! For what? And you were my inspiration too- No excuse- Again the weakest desires- I can say over and over it's a big deal- I know it's what I fear if I fear anything while searching for this queen building my land like a kingdom for my beings-

Who never sat down to teach that little girl and young son about how families work to form and stabilize- Shouldn't appreciation be unconditional loved understood like hereditary instinct-

Can't even tell stories if did would take up infinite pages the things seen messed up all over so many times over-

How many years do you have to fuck your life away? If in love and situations in it why not mend it- For its only respect to you and thee if you only knew- Is everything said maybe not as surly viewers have seen it themselves and probably made some of the same mistakes themselves- Not worth the mistakes never- Get your families on, and keep your families on...

Peace, Izzy

11:47 PM

8/1/07

Copyright©2007

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