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IIZZYY
Izzy .
United States, Ohio, toledo

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Sucks for the perfectionist dreamer

Sucks for the perfectionist dreamer
Making make believe real
Sucks for the perfectionist dreaming
Misleading self into believing
How life is beautiful perfect the way it is
Sucking up it's essence in full
Then to come to conclusions
It's not real at all the feel of things are
Sucks for the perfectionist dreamer
Favored dreams over reality
You're definitely in a reality check
Makes you think. it's such a life better
How one cannot suit such a mind knowing
Stubbornness out of all qualities of balance
To force things into being reality must this exists
How the frustrations of not being able to mold and bend
Ridged like frozen sand it's solid rock like dirty ice
Building a matrix to live in the creations hold you
Rather than letting be what just must be in existence
You become a villain to your own self


Peace, Izzy

7/07
Copyright©2007

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MMerlino Comment by: MMerlino - 2007-09-11 17:24
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sucks for the egoist too.
headymaverick Comment by: headymaverick - 2007-09-06 09:24
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I love the concept--something few people open their eyes to.
Your flow is great too. I love it.
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce - 2007-08-25 22:56
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yea...Sometimes you get so involved in whats not real you start to believe it is... *sigh* Im a perfect example. Love this poem. Reminds me of myself.

"Makes you think. it's such a life better"
wasn't sure if you meant to say something else here. I wasn't sure how to interpret this. . .

Thanks again. Rang true for me.
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