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From one eternity to the next
Love me?
Yes
From one eternity to the next
Yes, just squeeze the trigger.
My life was a haze of laughter and pure emotion.
Before it turned into a haze of bullet shards.
My life was a love story
Before it turned into a gun shot milieu
He loved me and I loved him
We overcame many obstacles too strong for most
Days of separation
I found love in the warmth of another
He found love in a chilled can
And yet, here we are
As in love as that first day of summer
When we sat together till dusk
And promised one another infinity
Hand in hand.
We were anything and everything but weak
Nothing could hold us back in our youthful ignorance
When he laughed I laughed, for years
And when there were tears, it seemed to never end.
We reached a middle area, becoming softer and slower
I could not live as fast as my spirit desired
One day we were immortal
The next, scheduling Botox like the rest of America
We loved each other too much to let this happen
To grow old is to grow weak
We made a vow to meet in the next facet of forever
Before this life had a chance to break the beauty of everything we had.
Our last embrace felt odd
Two bodies intertwined, yet cold.
Afterward we faced each other and raised our guns
And one explosion later I met the next eternity
Alone.
Turns out we were not as strong as I thought
Forgiveness was not a part of this man.
For when I found my love elsewhere
He lost all feeling
Kind of like a bullet embedded in your chest
You lose all feeling.
Before my metal was delivered
Somewhere in that horrid, icy cold
There was a flash of that warm summer day
And I felt my hand in his, and we stayed like that
Till I was more alone than Ive ever been.
He promised me forever
But forever was shorter than I had anticipated.
My life was a love story.
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| :) ususally I don't have enough patience to read poetry, but I loved the first line and then I loved the next and the next... and I actually read it and enjoyed it! I usually don't do that! |
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| Thank you for your input and suggestions, it means a lot =) |
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Your use of words is interesting in places but it can be difficult at times to comprehend exactly what the emotions portrayed are as you almost try and overwhelm the reader with the imagery used.
However, I did enjoy reading it and it finishes quite sadly.
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Comment by: jjsmith - 2007-08-26 03:41
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forever was shorter than I had anticipated
that's kind of janis joplin |
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Comment by: jjsmith - 2007-08-26 03:40
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OH!!!!!!!!!
if i liked poetry
i would love this |
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