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nonalienabductee
Niccole Segura
United States, Pennsylvania/Ohio

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George Died First

Niccole sat in her Psych class, half-asleep, tapping her pen against her notebook.  The professor was droning on about sociopathic personalities.  Niccole found this rather amusing.


            She read her conclusions with a small smile. 


            'The sociopath has no true emotions,' the professor said, pointing to a chart.


            Nodding, Niccole smiled inside as he ticked off her personality traits.  George was the first, and she enjoyed watching the parade of cops around his tragic demise.  But she was rapidly becoming bored.  Time to up the ante.


            She'd studied George for some time, and she knew about his final mistress, Teri, a 'dancer' at a cheap strip joint with a well-known temper.  It would be fun to lead the cops to her with some planted evidence and study the result.


            'Experiment 2,' she wrote in a clear hand.  'The effects of false accusation on an unbalanced personality.'


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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2007-11-11 19:22
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I have been keeping on reading your stories to find out your writing methods. However, the more I read, the better writer I find you are. Why not share all your writing skills? Have you got my story to mark? Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes.
fuyukodomo Comment by: fuyukodomo Online- 2007-09-25 15:30
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Haha! We have your previous stories along with this one to know -- your secret it out!

Seriously, neat story
Lovernottolove17 Comment by: Lovernottolove17 - 2007-08-28 08:36
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I like this. Very well done.
BethShanFan Comment by: BethShanFan - 2007-08-28 00:21
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haha, wow
Stevec Comment by: Stevec - 2007-08-27 13:21
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Throwdown!

I liked it.
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