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Still thinking
deborshi brahmachari
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i believe

I believe in freedom!!!
I believe in baseless chats with pallab while walking in a lonely road, watching the setting sun....
I believe in listening to a hazy scorpions song from a faded broadcast of Northeastern service,in an august summer night feeling the sad winds of change that wets my face through the small window of my room...
I believe in kissing the rain...
I believe in smelling the air...
I believe in ashitav's love for Pinkfloyd that inspires him to "kill my past" and force me to "come back to life'¦"
I believe that Angeline is alive!
I believe sex is the most beautiful thing in this world....
I belive in walking alone in a lonely full moon night in a dense forest near irongmara.
I belive in playing prank with school kids in a wet mid-summer late afternoon.
I believe in smelling the pines while my nokia 6270 sings Dream theatre.
I believe thankx lord there is evil that we can differentiate what's good...
I believe there are more John Lennons to come.....


MADAM Valerie's version

I believe in freedom
in baseless chats with pallab
while walking a lonely road
watching the setting sun

I believe in listening
to a hazy Scorpion's song
from a fading broadcast
on a late August night
feeling sad winds of change
wetting my face
through the small window
of my room

I believe in kissing rain
and in Ashitav's love for Pink Floyd
that inspires him to kill my past
forcing me to come back to life

I believe Angeline is alive
sex beautiful
walking alone on a full-moon night
in the dense forest near Irongmora

I believe in playing pranks
with school kids
on wet-summer afternoons
while my Nokia 6270
sings Dream Theatre

I believe in God and give thanks
that I can differentiate
good from evil

I believe there are more
John Lennons to come



THANKs VAL FOR THE LOVE!!
I BELIEVE I WILL WRITE BETTER ONE DAY!

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rachelle11 Comment by: rachelle11 - 2007-09-02 08:18
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oh ... i believe you will enjoy this trailer:)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=X4EfdaxUiO0
rachelle11 Comment by: rachelle11 - 2007-09-02 08:17
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i believe you are right about those sounds in silence:) nice piece.
wiwtstosom Comment by: wiwtstosom - 2007-09-01 10:40
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i believe my brother can do it.. :D..
34thParallel Comment by: 34thParallel - 2007-08-30 11:21
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very nicely done--indeed...thanks for posting.
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-08-30 01:03
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for some reason the last line resonates. nice.
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