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karjon
Karen Jones
United Kingdom, Glasgow

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Reflection - Wee Stories #10

Looking through Ron's photograph albums, Lyn noticed there were none of him with friends or family; he was always the photographer.

Even in pictures of himself, his outstretched arm was visible, holding the camera just the right distance from his tanned, smiling face. Others involved the use of a mirror, catching himself from various angles, different expressions acted out for the camera.

All through their never-ending-never-going-anywhere relationship, she had begged to visit his apartment, pleaded to have her photograph taken with him, something she could treasure. He said he hated having his picture taken, hated his tiny, bleak apartment. He stayed at her place, he took pictures of her - but she couldn't see them here.

Now he was gone, she realised he had only ever had one true love. Framed shots of Ron filled his vast, luxurious bedroom. Ron smiling, frowning, crying.

All at arm's length.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2007-11-14 17:14
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I have read many of your stories so far, and I find that you are a very good spotlight of life. I wonder if you have a special talant for it. If so, please share it with me. Best regards.
Rosalie67 Comment by: Rosalie67 - 2007-09-14 11:21
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Beautiful. I am now really enjoying the flash as a literary art form.
esknapp Comment by: esknapp - 2007-09-05 07:02
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Karen,
I havn't read your other comments (you have received many), so I must hope I am not being redundant. I particularly like the reflexive play on the idea of self-photographs at arm's length. Ron really doesn't want to get too close to himself, does he? Great write.
citydweller Comment by: citydweller - 2007-09-04 07:14
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Ah, I've met a few like Ron before. I enjoyed the phrase "never-ending-never-going-anywhere," and the second-to-last paragraph cemented the description of the character.

Really enjoyed this one.

~J.
BettyXYZ Comment by: BettyXYZ - 2007-09-03 08:01
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What a complicated three way relationship. I thought the phrase "never-ending-never-going-anywhere relationship" was quite memorable. A fascinating, in depth story for so few words. Great.
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