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IIZZYY
Izzy .
United States, Ohio, toledo

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Water Detached The Giving

Sitting on this cloud as the night get navy'er blue darker- days coming up from other ends
Looking down on my cities the country side by side taking air cool to cold
How many heights from the earths ground- all seen is dots below but the people felt like my children
Perceived felt the vibes of thoughts and emotions from actions and interactions they were
Momentum waves pieced up and deciphered it all from the person on the corner to the ones asleep
Taking in their dreams the pleasure the fear and the adventure all at once at one time it was crazy
As I sat on my cloud I had created to sit on up high up in that lonely place in the sky up there up there
Looking down from my location in great the state of thought it was electricity radio energy it all so'¦
Electrical
From my huge pot that's filling up with water the essence- I pull it over to my side and exhale
Test it with a small of the smallest drop first as the droplet lands on the earth it bubbles a splash
From the slash of the droplet of the smallest pour grows thousands of sprouts
It was the future Plants
Amazing the site it was if you could have seen it with your flesh eyes
Excited at the results of my experiment with science
Detached from it all to give answers and solutions
Looking over at the shiny pot like water of diamonds and gold unique
The greatest of little arms wrap around the container
Lifting up the jug full to tip over
Not giving in ration I pour over the pot
Like a bomb the wave of water pour profusely in bundle SHOOOTS FROM THE SKY!
It hits the earth and spreads forever spreading
It was the future
Given for the price called free
Raining down at once
The conciseness took

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