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MatthewMarquis
Matthew Marquis
United States, NC, Asheville

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Decimation

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bomb strikes without
warning. People running,
screaming in great agony...
then burned

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Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-08-31 20:53
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I liked your longer poem. This is sharp and spare - a gift you have - but it doesn't develop on the page.

Hey, I like the enjambment of the first two lines.
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