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Rosie Sandler
Rosie Sandler
United Kingdom, Essex

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Reflection - Karjohn's Challenge 10

If I hadn't read Through the Looking Glass, I don't suppose I'd ever have tried to get into a mirror. I spent so many hours of my childhood touching the glass with my fingers, willing the surface to dissolve and let me through.

So I was more than prepared the day my grandfather's wardrobe mirror finally distorted and sent me, with a dizzying flip, to the other side.

When I checked my reflection, I discovered that, while I had started out half-heartedly as a girl, I had ended up (I checked inside my underpants, to be sure) whole-heartedly a boy. I put my hands in my new, masculine-tailored pockets and practised swaggering, as I'd seen Sam Cook do at school.

An old lady hovered into view. 'Is nowhere sacred?' she murmured.

I swivelled round. 'Grandfather?'

She sighed. 'Yes, it's me. Now, do you mind? I have some escaping to do.'

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mafsa Comment by: mafsa - 2007-09-25 04:22
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great with Through the Looking Glass, an enjoyable read. thanks for sharing!
Mary:p
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-09-24 12:48
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Is that 'the' Sam Cook? I really enjoyed your take on this one, Rosie. Sorry I missed it before, but these challenges seem to fly by so quickly. If I have a busy week then I miss out on so much great stuff.
Thanks for a well-written, cleverly-thought-up challenge.
Please E-mail me if I seem to be missing your work as I need some prompting sometimes.
Grae.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-09-02 14:07
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Oh, I like that - I'd love to know what it's like to be on the other side (just for a wee while, mind. Loved the 'dizzying flip' - great description.

Thanks for another great Wee Story, Rosie - really enjoyed the read.

Cheers

Karen
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2007-08-31 16:46
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Ah, thank you. I told you I was dense tonight. Well, more dense than usual. haha

Teri xo
Rosie Sandler Comment by: Rosie Sandler - 2007-08-31 14:47
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They've both swapped genders - so the narrator has gone from girl to boy, and the grandfather is now an old lady.
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