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wiwtstosom
shonali bhattacharya
India, west bengal, kolkata

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thank you gabriel garcia marquez

And so we started speaking about
One hundred years of solitude.

You stood with hands deep down in pockets
While I stuck out my tongue, glued to rain.

You marveled porticos in neon light; when I wanted
To see what was on the other side of the mountain.

You said mountains are stark, you preferred me briny,
Sun deep scorched hair all a tumult aquamarine.

You painted my world burnt sienna.
You said that's the colour of soil.

You said I gave back
Life to your life again.

Do you really stand hands deep in pockets?
When the sky breaks down in rain?

Quipu knots it formed all along, love
Still stayed a pnemonic pain.

One day we would surely meet in person
Let our minds meet till then.

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taylortroutman Comment by: taylortroutman - 2008-05-08 21:10
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First and foremost, I affirm your tribute to Gabo. Here's hoping that your pen will inspire others to "meet minds" with the Latin American Boom. And I think Marquez would enjoy your parallelism, turning introspectively on yourself to find both the great beauty and great tragedy that marks 100 years.
wiwtstosom Comment by: wiwtstosom - 2007-12-30 00:47
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thanku john..masterpiece is overated.. but i am glad u enjoyed it.. please read the new post if u wud..
Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2007-12-27 19:15
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Masterpiece. I'm afraid you have a new admirer! It's a personal poem, I can only guess the context, but I can sense two minds entwined. I loved the contrasting juxtapositioning of rain with hands in pockets. It's refreshing to read an actual poem, not just a brain dump of "how I feel today". PS: Like Thunderpen it is the image of the skeleton of the ship that sticks in my mind. I don't know why.
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-11-29 19:34
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enjoyed reading this poem.
bhalo theko
wiwtstosom Comment by: wiwtstosom - 2007-11-29 13:14
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thank u thunderpen.. the word is pnemonic it has to do with the way the quipu knots were written.. they had a pnemonic pattern..
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