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'Yes, I'm drunk.'

'Because it hurts less when I cut myself when I'm wasted.'

'Why? Because it's the best alternative to what I want to do.'

'Drive my car around a 90 degree turn going about 80 mph.'

'Because you've killed me. That's why. Thanks, by the way.'

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TheSourMindofZPx Comment by: TheSourMindofZPx - 2007-05-19 06:44
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Sounds to me like there alot of bad blood in the mix. My only question is how did things become so bitter. Keeps me guessing but the write is wicked in a good way.
dseko Comment by: dseko - 2007-05-15 06:30
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Makes me want to know who and/or what made you feel this way. You could very easily develop this into a short story piece. You say a lot in just a few words. Nice job.
yellowcindy Comment by: yellowcindy - 2007-03-12 17:26
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i like the "short story theme". it's nice
Duval1219 Comment by: Duval1219 - 2006-11-17 22:06
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Now, if I could just make a point like this in so few words. Me, no way. I tend to babble and ramble on too much. It does make you want to know the more specific and detailed story. I liked it!!
isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-07-05 19:05
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This took me a moment to get. But I really enjoyed it. It has a very nice..wow factor. Its awesome actually.
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