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JamesxNinja
James Barricklow
United States, Oklahoma, Sallisaw

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Just Look Away (laws of decency)

Laws of decency
Don't tell us who we need to be
Don't make us better for you to see
Just let me see myself for me
Be who I want to be
Not perfection in the eyes of society,
Because those around me
Don't care that it's me
They just care that I am seen
And what they see
Might not be what they want to see

Just look away
Don't change me
With your laws of decency
Just look away
Don't change me
To brighten just a few seconds of your day
Or to bask in your own glory
Just look away
And see
The things you think you need to see.

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HelloHaruko Comment by: HelloHaruko - 2007-09-03 11:01
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you never cease to amaze me with your poems.The way you write says alot about how you see the world.It takes a little bravery to write your feelings and views and share them with complete strangers.Kudos to everyone here!
eternaloptimist Comment by: eternaloptimist - 2007-09-02 11:50
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I agree. In the highly judged society we live in today, sometimes I feel like just screaming this message, "Don't change me with your laws of decency"!

Good stuff I enjoyed it.
Murf Comment by: Murf - 2007-09-02 10:40
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Strait to the point, good one.
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