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ViolettePen
Sara L.
United States, MA

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Desire

I am desire, your accomplice
en route to a life of pleasure.
I murmur, a wind in your ear,
then recur as howls in your brain.
I empower you with charm,
a gift so stately and manipulative
that you can't deny its sway
over your victims ' and you.

I must be invincible'¦
There's no way to avoid me'¦
You won't resist me'¦

I am your perpetual state,
the obsession in your shallow mind.
When I hunger for more, I drive you
to hunt for your prey with a kiss.
You only rest when I tire
and mingle when I feel humane,
for you see'¦ we may be partners,
but you make a worthy host.

I must be satisfied'¦
There's no other way to function'¦
You can't control me'¦

I am an unleashed demon,
a tyrant that knows no compromise.
I continue seeking arousal when
you've lost all energy for the night.
I laugh at the face of romance
but give you some room to stray
because I can lure you to my side again
with the words they always long to hear.

I must be insane'¦
There has to be a better way'¦
I have to change'¦

I am the bane of your existence,
the sole possession you have left.
I am the throbbing pain where
your feelings used to beat.
I am your friend and sworn enemy,
your one remaining choice for a lover
now that each one that you pursue
sees me instead of you.

I must be a monster'¦
There is someone out there'¦
You can be conquered'¦

I am desire, a weapon of sin
that has led you to ruin.
You brandished me with pride,
unaware of the harm I wield.
Now, you wonder what has become of you
and whether my magic has worked.
Well, the answer lies there in your bed '
and you'll see that I have done my duty.

I must be a sick man'¦
There is no other way'¦
I can't resist you'¦

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Aria Comment by: Aria - 2008-05-23 13:13
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Surprising no one has commmented on this yet. Strong imagery and nararation. You worked well with the words 'weapon' 'sin' and 'host'. It was fun to read because I knew that Desire was having fun writing it. You had a very interesting idea. Its the other endof the spectrum. We usually hear about people speaking of their lusts and desires, we never hear what our desires have to say. Good work.
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