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Gary Holden
Gary Holden
United Kingdom, West Sussex, Crawley

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Last Night I Made Love to a Ghost part two

Windows ajar, the cool night air softly blows in. Looking out she feels a sensation in the atmosphere around her half naked body, feeling hot breath slowly moving around her. Reflecting the subtle rays of the moon in her half closed eyes a flame of passion begins to fire. Inviting lips become wet with anticipation and her lily white smooth skin begins to tingle.

Closer the ghostly presence begins to invite himself into her mind and body. Starting to play and tease - this essence caressesing her sweetness, wanting to feel her taste with a tongue moving all over her body, watching her face for acknowledgement.

Looking at the silk white panties she has around her most intimate parts, the ghost wants so much to travel inside, remove the delicate wrapping. He opens his hand wanting to communicate, warmth taking over his long dead body, beginning to boil with longing. His heart starts to beat, stronger and stronger, knowing that something perfect is going to happen. She is so beautiful.

He is startled as suddenly she puts her hand in his. Like an electric current the sensations of her body run through him, trembling in anticipation. Pulling him closer, he loses himself - clothes scattered on the floor, finding she has moved to her bed, him lying on his back with her kneeling over him. The excitement is overwhelming. Softly she starts to nestle soft kisses over his neck moving quickly down to his chest. Moving slowly,so slowly, he is desperately tries to breathe as she gets lower and lower. Sensing a touch, hands through her hair, she smiles seductively, coming up for a second, teasingly searching for a reaction.

Not believing this is happening, he gently touches her cheek, now feeling alive with her scintillating heat of passion. Smiling lovingly he touches her cheek. Moments are becoming more and more unbearable. Self control is being lost, he feels her tongue running down the outlines of his thighs. Her fingers are now playfully stroking the tip of his erect manhood. Sensing his pleasure, she can feel his body shaking beneath her touch, feeling his pleasure run through veins, becoming alive. She knows that all this is insane but she wants this to happen now so much.

'Let us be insane, let us lose control,' she says to the ghost beneath her.

Her lips taste his skin, he is hers to play with. Desperately he wants to live and tries to raise his head to look into her hungry eyes, wanting so much to regain control of his emotions. Once more hands caress lightly on his stomach, going down. She knows he cannot resist. He is alive, ready for the pleasure, thinking now of removing those panties that hide her lust. Smoothly he takes hold of the silk as she moves away from him and they are gone.
Two bodies are now ready in expectation of each other, heartbeats joined, feeling precious.

They are now in a new world waiting anxiously to see where the twinkling of time will take them. He is beginning to feel. As his hands excite her breasts he senses she is so full of life and and he wants so much to be part of it. Moving downwards towards her groin his hands now start to tantalise her sweet warm precious sex.He begins to caress her wetness, a finger moving slowly around stimulating her and finally her feeling her warmth. Removing his hand he tastes on his lips the sweet flavour of her responsive sensations.

Flavours hit him like paradise on earth, realising she was paradise. Her eyes peer at him full of wonderment, then her whole body becomes uncontrollable once more. He loses sight of her as she softly strokes his tip with her tongue, barely touching, then carefully tormenting him, she plays whilst he becomes wrapped in ecstasy.

Then sitting astride him she gently moves her body onto his, slowly, very slowly, in small circular movements upon his crotch. Feeling his pleasure rise they both begin to writh uncontrollably. She can feel him enter her, perfect and sublime.
Taking his hands she places them on her breasts gently touching her nipples aching with desire. Then she stops, pauses, barely moving leaving the rampant intoxication between the two of them to grow as every second passes.

Faster and faster she is quivering as he thrusts deeper. She can feel him grow inside her, breathing becomes ragged, finally making her push away as she catches her breath. This time he grabs her, spins her around on the bed, instantly connecting their bodies in lust. Neither want to lose the feeling of becoming one.

He wants her so much and she wants him. They both feel each other completely, minds spin endlessly uniting with each other. Staring into her eyes he finally realises he has become a living being once more. He asks if she is OK with what will happen next. Smiling sweetly she assures him she is. The whole world felt like stopping all around them. Only their movement and breathing existed. She begins to moan, the sound covering the beating of hearts, their movement now locked in each others natural rhythm. At times she stops pulling him out to tease then wanting him deep inside again knowing how big she is making him.

They turn again, he runs fingers down her spine keeping to the beat of their love. He watches her breast playfully dance as she continues her movements. She is a perfection of beauty to his eyes and he feels her inside him hypnotic in a trance following the call of their souls. Electrical pulses run down her body as she pushes him a little further. Eyes on each other continue to entrance. His look intense, stroking her innermost thoughts. Finally she looses herself. Passion overtakes her, for a second she is scared of letting herself go, then she feels free. Sweat runs down her back, she doesn't want this moment to end, wanting him to stay inside her.

'they come together as one
hoping as the sunrise of the morning will happen,
that they will still be together
the ghost of the night
will live on forever.'

Written with Natalie C.

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krademacher Comment by: krademacher Online- 2008-01-11 12:45
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Interesting stuff - I strongly suggesting tagging this as "adult/erotic content"
Comment by: - 2007-09-11 13:43
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Hm... I think this piece needs to decide if it's about a ghost or about sex, or both. It seemed to be switching from one to the other, which can be annoying.

Of course it was hot :), but if you want it to be about a ghost, I think it needs a bit more substance, a bit more background detail. If you just want to write a story about sex, get rid of the ghost... make him real from the beginning. And please, a bit less of the extreme description (no woman is that gorgeous AND innocent at the same time. it just bugs me.)

Just totally my oppinion.
CelticCat Comment by: CelticCat - 2007-09-06 09:39
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Well, since I don't smoke, I think I'll go call my boyfriend now. Suddenly, I miss him!!!
Quite erotic, well-written, intense. There are a few minor typos... you may want to re-read to catch them. Although I'm no fan of erotica, I really enjoyed this piece. 'Watching' the ghost come alive through his passion is a beautiful notion. Love it.
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