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Angelica
Samantha Snedorf
South Africa, Gauteng, Johannesberg

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By the seaside

My heart is as the ocean.
A fathomless depth filled with endless beauty
And the corpses and a thousand lost.
Rise you rotting cadevers
And leave from this world.
Your stench shall remain in those cemetaries
And weave it's way into my future.
No amount of tears i cry
Can wash away that rotting odour
Because alas it seems it belongs to me.

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Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-04-10 18:09
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This is incredible! Honestly, I was moved. A powerful piece. Bravo.
prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2007-03-06 00:25
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No amount of tears i cry
Can wash away that rotting odour
Because alas it seems it belongs to me.
perhaps, cry does not help us out but action. Alright?
ChazMatthews Comment by: ChazMatthews - 2007-02-28 09:55
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Wow I really like this.
father Comment by: father - 2007-02-25 13:09
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I see hardened courage and soft beauty in this poem. Very good.
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-22 21:58
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I really liekd this , i think its very beautiful, and deep. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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